Hello, loyal readers!
With June at an end and July kicking in, we’ve decided to do something that most of you are doing right now. Take a vacation.
Don’t worry! We’ll be back again in Autumn with new content.
If you are a YA writer and would like to become a contributor to this site, send us your ideas using the form below.
In the meantime, stay cool–and happy writing!
Hannah, Kacey, Steph
All The Way YA
When I first started writing a certain number of years ago, I didn’t know any other writers. I was just eager to sit down and write, happy to finally be finding the time to be creative again after a hiatus due to jobs, marriage, kids – you know, life stuff.
I was excited, alone, but not realizing it could be any different. Don’t get me wrong, I would have liked to have met other writers at that point, but the fact that I didn’t know any didn’t bother me. I was writing, I was happy. I delved into my world, my characters, my 4-book story (I like series, so of course I was going to write a series not just one book!).
I wrote, and wrote, and wrote some more. Loving all my characters and exploring all kinds of situations. They were all fully developed characters, very much alive to me. They each had their own storyline. And filled up a first book that was about 230k words long.
I was thrilled. And – needless to say – very unaware of the market.
As you can imagine, that manuscript didn’t find a home. And I started to realize that maybe I needed to learn about craft and do some market research. I bought some books on writing and the market, revised the manuscript, signed up for an online class… and met some other writers.
For the first time, I had someone I could share with. For the first time, I wasn’t alone as a writer.
That first class, where I signed up to learn more about craft and the market, actually gave me something much more valuable: contact with fellow writers.
Through that first contact, that first experience getting and giving feedback, also came the suggestion to join a local crit group. When I admitted to having no idea how to find one, a fellow writer-now-friend suggested I join my local chapter of SCBWI (Society for Children’s Book Writers and Illustrators).
I did. And discovered a whole new world: the writing community.
Not only were there crit groups but also workshops, conferences, opportunities to meet industry professionals and get their feedback – and most importantly, fellow creatives.
Joining SCBWI was probably the best thing I could ever have done for my writing. It gave me a network of fellow creatives to learn with, to share with. Here, I found other people with the same passion for children’s literature, all at different stages of their path to (and after) publication. We understood each other, the ups and downs, the various stages of excitement, frustration, hope and fear that we all feel – even after getting a contract.
And although it’s true that when you sit down and write you are alone, it doesn’t mean you have to be a recluse. In fact, one of the things I have come to cherish as a writer is the writing community.
This past weekend, for example, I went to the Book Bound Retreat in Kent, UK (pictured above). It was heaven. A beautiful manor house, amazing professionals sharing their experience and knowledge, committed and dedicated fellow writers – most of whom I had never met before – and time to discuss our work and dig in deeper.
The Book Bound Retreat was amazing, for many reasons, but the one that sticks out the most for me was the way everyone came together and shared. We went from being strangers to a warm, supportive group in less than an afternoon. And although a large part of that was due to the humor and warmth of the people running the event (hats off to Sara Grant, Sara O’Connor and Karen Ball!), it also came from each of the participants. Every single person there was working on getting their story to its best and was supportive of everyone else. And that’s what makes the writing community so special. The support, the understanding, the willingness to share and be there for the ups and the downs.
Ultimately, we write our books alone – but we don’t have to go down the writer path alone.
In fact, now that I know what it’s like to have a supportive network, writer friends who understand the journey and the excitement of writing ‘the end’ dozens of times for each manuscript, I can’t imagine not having all my fellow creatives on the path with me!
For those wondering how to meet fellow creatives, here are a few that have worked for me:
- joining a writers group like SCBWI (for everything from picture books to young adult)
- attending a retreat like Book Bound or one run by your local chapter of SCBWI/other writers group
- attending workshops and conferences (they can be local, national or international – each will have a different flavor, but all bring something special)
- taking online classes
- joining an online writers community like Savvy Authors (they have classes, writing groups, forums etc.)
- attending local author events at a library, a bookstore, a community center
- if you are living overseas (as I am) you can often find something through your country’s national group like FAWCO (Federation of American Women’s Clubs Overseas) or the British Women’s Club.
And what about you? How have you found fellow creatives? What has your experience been like?
Happy writing to all!
Born in the US, Dina von Lowenkraft has lived on 4 continents, worked as a graphic artist for television and as a consultant in the fashion industry. Somewhere between New York and Paris she picked up an MBA and a black belt. Dina is currently the Regional Advisor for SCBWI Belgium, where she lives with her husband, two children, three horses and a cat. Dina loves to create intricate worlds filled with conflict and passion. She builds her own myths while exploring issues of belonging, racism and the search for truth… after all, how can you find true love if you don’t know who you are and what you believe in? Dina’s key to developing characters is to figure out what they would be willing to die for. And then pushing them to that limit. Dina’s debut YA Fantasy, Dragon Fire, was a finalist in ForeWord Reviews’ 2013 Book of the Year Award, in the 2014 Eric Hoffer Award and in the 2014 Readers’ Favorite Award.
Like many of you, I woke up Sunday morning to hear the devastating news about the massacre at Pulse nightclub in Orlando. An hour later, the number of victims being reported as dead, more than doubled. As I write this, 49 lives were torn from this earth in the midst of celebrating freedom, love and acceptance—people who were dancing, rejoicing, and embracing. Several remain in the hospital, some in critical condition.
The fact that the gunman’s target was a gay nightclub during Pride Week on Latinx night cannot be ignored or swept under the rug.
I imagined the families waiting to hear if their loved ones were one of the fallen. I thought about the people inside that nightclub who lost friends and family members, who experienced this terrible hate crime, their terror and their sadness. I think about Ramon Guerrero and Christopher “Drew” Leinonen, a young couple in love, who might have one day planned a wedding together, but whose families instead are planning their funerals.
In the midst of tragedy, there are stories of hope and bravery as well. The law enforcement officers and first responders who saved lives, the doctors, nurses and hospital staff currently working around the clock to save lives, the hundreds of people who stood in line to donate blood, the thousands of people who came out for Monday night’s vigil in Orlando to honor and mourn the lives of those who were lost, the activists who organize these events and speak out for the LGBTQX community on a daily basis because they know how important it is for all communities to have equality and justice, and to stand united in the face of fear, violence and hate.
When I look at the beautiful, young, vibrant faces of those who were murdered, my rage at this injustice is immediate and visceral. I ask, who is to blame? But we are all part of a society that puts profit over human lives. We allow bigotry to prevail in our schools, in our legislatures, in our houses of worship and in our communities. We are all responsible.
As writers, editors, agents, librarians, publishers, parents and educators, it’s so important that we use our talent, time, and energy to promote the virtues we want reflected in our society—compassion, love, respect and kindness. Our stories should reflect our world in all its beautiful complexities. Young people should see themselves represented in our pages—their ethnicity, their sexuality, their religion, their passions and their fears. Our message to them: You are not alone. We are with you. We understand you and we love you just as you are.
As individuals, we must lead by example and stand up for each other. As communities, we must make sure that our laws are inclusive and promote the individual liberties of all its members. As citizens, we have to educate ourselves on the issues and the leaders who represent us. We must do more than hope and pray, we must vote and elect leaders who reflect our values and priorities and work to ensure our demands are being heard.
We must be vigilant and we must be brave. We must stand together with our brothers and sisters in Orlando, the LGBTQX community, the #BlackLivesMatter movement and beyond, open our hearts, our minds and our arms to each other and show unity, solidarity, and power. I believe we as a nation can do this because I believe #LoveWins
LGBTQX READING LIST
ASH by Malinda Lo
ARISTOTLE AND DANTE DISCOVER THE SECRETS OF THE UNIVERSE by Benjamin Alire Saenz
BEAUTIFUL MUSIC FOR UGLY CHILDREN by Kirstin Cronn-Mills
BETTER NATE THAN EVER by Tim Federle
BEYOND MAGENTA: TRANSGENDER TEENS SPEAK OUT by Susan Kuklin
EVERY DAY by David Levithan
EVERYTHING LEADS TO YOU by Nina LaCour
FINGERSMITH by Sarah Waters
GEORGE by Alex Gino
IF I WAS YOUR GIRL by Meredith Russo
MORE HAPPY THAN NOT by Adam Silvera
MORE THAN THIS by Patrick Ness
M OR F by Lisa Papademetriou and Chris Tebbetts
NONE OF THE ABOVE by I. W. Gregorio
SIMON VS. THE HOMO SAPIENS AGENDA by Becky Albertalli
Do you have LGBTQ titles to add? Add them to the comments section and we will update our list!
Laura Lascarso was born and raised in Largo, Florida, graduated from the University of Florida and currently resides in Tallahassee, Florida. She stands with the Orlando community in this time of suffering and healing. She is the author of COUNTING BACKWARDS (Atheneum) and RACING HEARTS (Leap Books). Her forthcoming novella, ANDRE IN FLIGHT, will be published with Dreamspinner Press later this summer. Follow her on Twitter @lauralascarso
Every year, when I go on vacation, I tell my family that I’m not going to write. I’m going to focus entirely on them and relax.
Here’s how the discussion usually goes…
“You’re not going to edit anything?” they ask.
“No,” I say. “I’m not even going to bring my laptop.”
“What about starting a new story?” they ask.
“Nope. I’m not going to start anything new, either. It’s just going to be about you.”
But, they don’t quite understand that writing is not only my job, it’s my passion. I’ve tried explaining to them over and over that getting to write is an escape for me. It even helps me be a better parent. But they don’t get it.
So…I’ve lied. Every time.
Before you get mad, or, like one woman I’ve encountered, tell me I’m going straight to hell. I have spent time with my family on these vacations. We’ve had many memorable days driving through towns, picnicking on the beach, collecting seashells, catching crabs off the dock, movie marathons, and donut shop visits. But what my family’s never realized is that on these trips I’ve either written or worked on something writing-related every day.
Now, I’m betting that by this point you’re staring at your screen in wonder, hoping I’ll share these amazing secrets. Never fear. Here’s my summer gift to all of you.
Steph’s tips for making your family think you’re on vacation, when you’re really not…
Vacation in the place where your current W.I.P. is set. Personally, I thought this was a brilliant plan on my part. I don’t need to be writing all day when I’m camped out in my novel’s setting. Sure it’s tough to do if you’re writing say apocalyptic thrillers, but get creative. Since mine was set in the Outer Banks, I went there. Did my husband and mother raise an eye when I drove them and the kids to the Cape Hatteras High School, Medical Center, Library, and Dancing Turtle Coffeeshop? Maybe a little. “If you’re going to visit a place, you really need to see it through the locals’ eyes,” I said.
- Get up extremely early under the guise of picking seashells or watching the sunrise. No one is awake then, because vacation usually tires everyone out. Even me, which is why I compensated by making a double-strength pot of coffee every morning and falling asleep by ten. This time is usually good for at least a thousand words, unless you, too, are traveling with my mother, and she also
wants to bond with you. Get up early, do what you want until they wake up, and then enjoy. I participated in everything my family wanted. “Don’t you want to get up early, too? The sunrise is gorgeous.” I asked.
- Buy a journal and take it with you. I’m pretty proud of this angle. Yeah, I took a journal, but it wasn’t mine. It was a Character Journal. I wrote it from the POV of my main character. Although I was definitely capturing what happened on vacation, I did it through my main character’s eyes. “This journal is so calming,”I said.
- Make a playlist for your WIP and play it during dinner. This is a surefire way to keep those gears churning all throughout the evening. Pop the cork on a bottle of wine and turn up that Iron Maiden or Civil Twilight or Mozart. Who never got inspired over a little House Of Pain? Just because you aren’t pounding away at the keyboard, it doesn’t mean you can’t drum a new plot twist over some shrimp cocktail, a glass of Chardonnay, and a Bach Fugue. “Let’s listen to some of Mommy’s music,” I said.
- Take pictures of places and people that remind you of your characters. I’m a visual person, so nothing’s better than having something to reference. Not to mention, you’ll end up with some great photos to document your trip. Admittedly, I had a lot of explaining to do when pictures of random cars, people, and dogs showed up in the shared family pics folder, but there’s something to be said for using your own images. When you go home, you can even upload them to Evernote or Pinterest for additional inspiration.
There you have it. My shortlist of ways to keep writing while on vacation. You may call me a workaholic. But let me tell you something I didn’t include above. I did unplug from social media, shut off my email notifications, and just explore.
Though I may have been just a wee bit stealthy about not taking a writing break, I didn’t miss a moment with my family. When I came back to my desk two weeks later, I was refreshed, happy, and bursting with new ideas.
Happy summer, my writing friends. Here’s to sticking your toes in the sand and just exploring.
I can remember the moment I knew I was a writer. It wasn’t when I got my first book deal or held my words in my hands. It wasn’t when the reviews came in—the raving ones and the not-so-raving ones. It didn’t happen at writer’s critique group or at my first signing. In fact, I think I was more of a writer then than I am now.
Let me explain.
My moment came in 2009. I was fresh out of my college prerequisites and four weeks from beginning my ultrasound program. In those four weeks, I parked myself in front of my laptop and I wrote with reckless abandon. I didn’t think, I just did. My sentence structure was terrible. I didn’t know anything about description or character arcs or what made a plot, I simply knew I had a story to tell.
At the end of those four weeks I had a behemoth. 120,000 words of a YA novel. In case you missed it earlier: It. Was. Terrible. But that’s not important. What matters is how I felt. Exhilarated. Proud. Like I could take on the damn world simply because I created one. This was the moment that made me a writer. It didn’t matter that I switched between present and past tense every other paragraph or that my character rolled her eyes 469 times. My word count was 40,000-50,000 words above the limit for my genre. My exposition went on for pages like some terrible voiceover in a bad movie. I had no idea what I was doing. But, listen to me: None of that mattered.
Writing fulfilled something inside of me. It was a hollow place I’d been carrying around for decades, an empty space just begging to be filled. And I was BRIMMING with it. What’s it? you ask.
Hope. Purpose. Sadness. Sweetness. Pain. Possibility. Bitterness. Understanding. Magic.
I had created a whirlwind out of nothing. And it was the most amazing thing I have ever done. This is how art should feel. It should be everything, and yet, at the same time, it should be nothing at all.
In the space between my college break and now I have become many things. Am I still a writer? Absolutely. But I am also a copyeditor, a proofreader, a designer, a marketer, a social media expert, an agent searcher, a publicist, a giveaway creator, a review reader, and an internet Googler. And because I am all of those things, I no longer allow myself to just be a writer.
Now, because I am also an editor, I don’t allow myself to write with reckless abandon. There is a voice inside my head analyzing every word, sentence, page. Am I better because of this? Of course. Because I am a publicist, I must know what’s hot right now and how I can use it to my advantage. So what if I want to write a 700 page epic fantasy about a spork who goes rogue from Taco Bell. People want strong female characters (but not too strong) and males that know how to be in second place (but not too second place) and flowing, beautiful settings in cities I’ve never visited. They want characters who surprise them (but not too much) and romance that’s new (and yet the same). They want and want and want…
You know what I’ve lost along the way? My exhilaration. My purpose. Because I am also all these other things, my wonder with creation has suffered.
It all boils down to validation. (I could spend ten posts talking about writer validation!) In becoming all of these things and stretching myself so thin, I am telling myself that who I am is not good enough. I need an audience to be good. A web presence. An agent. An editor. I need reviews to validate everything I have written to prove…
To prove what?
That I am a writer?
But that’s wrong. The moment I felt most like a writer happened before I even knew how to write properly. Art should be messy. It should be soul-searching and in your face, not orderly and rigid, defined by rules and the limitations of knowledge. And it shouldn’t be defined by society, no matter how much they think they know.
I wish I could tell you that I find myself fulfilled simply by writing. What’s that saying? Ignorance is bliss. When I was blissfully unaware that my writing was terrible, it was PURE JOY to write. Hours flew by beneath my keys. My words—although not stellar—made me so happy I could’ve burst from it.
I do not know how to return to this place of reckless abandon…I only know that I want to.
“So that’s your first assignment,” the teacher said. “Go find a comfortable place to write and come back with a first draft in two hours.”
I don’t remember what the assignment was, but given what I do remember of the summer, it likely had something to do with a small, traveling circus.
It was July 1992 and it was one of the first days of a program called the Pennsylvania Governor’s School for the Arts (PGSA) – a now defunct, tuition-free, five-week residential program for high school artists of all varieties. I was 16.
There were ten or so of us fiction writers and another ten or so poets. Our workshops were held in unremarkable classrooms, but when given time to write, we had access to the entire campus of a small college tucked into the corner of Northwestern Pennsylvania. Over the summer we fanned out across the grounds staking claims at the base of trees or in the grotto next to the statue of the Virgin Mary. Some of us went to the main building to sit in comfy chairs and enjoy the air-conditioning. That first morning though, we all stayed within eyeshot of one another.
We had been told at orientation that we were the “best of the best,” but we were also told of an experiment the program had done several years earlier – they had invited students who didn’t seem to show the same amount of promise as everyone else. They wanted to know if being surrounded by the “best of the best” would positively impact the other students. I don’t know if any of us remembered hearing the outcome of that experiment. We were all too busy wondering if that were their subtle way of telling us: The experiment might still be going on and some of you might be our test cases.
That first morning we sized each other up. Was I the test subject? Was he? But that wasn’t the only thing bothering us. After just a few moments of trying to write in our own little locations, we started to gravitate towards each other. Awkwardly, we tried to talk.
Then one of us said what we were all thinking: “This is so hard. Give me a pre-calculus assignment and I’ll write you six poems, but tell me to go write a poem and I freeze.”
As high school students, we were use to sneaking time to write. Personally, and my 7th grade math teacher can attest to this, I always had two notebooks open. One for taking notes and one for writing stories. No one had ever given us permission to prioritize our writing. If writing was our dream career, high school was our job. We had to get used to our new freedom.
Earlier this month, I was reminded of that summer, and what freedom to write really means, when I had the opportunity to “unworkshop.” An unworkshop is a self-directed, writing retreat, held at The Highlights Foundation, a rustic collection of buildings tucked into the corner of Northeast Pennsylvania. Writers are given a clean, cozy room of one’s own, plus three delicious meals a day, unlimited snacks and beverages, great conversation in small doses, encouragement from every direction (including from the chef and servers) and an unspoiled countryside for wandering.
As a wife, mother and full-time-plus employee, it was the embodiment of permission to write. Unlike my experience at PGSA, it took no time to get used to. I dove right in. I wrote 9000 words in 47 hours. I plotted the rest of the manuscript by a stream. I figured out how to fix another manuscript. I made friends. I got wonderful advice. I was my true self.
When I told a writer friend that I was going to Highlights, he suggested it might be more economical to get an AirBnB in the town where we lived. I believe he suggested getting cereal and Ramen noodles and just powering through a weekend. I considered it. But in the end, I made my reservation at Highlights. It was the right thing to do.
I had no way of knowing that being taken care of (in the way I was at Highlights), would fuel my writing. It wasn’t just that I’d been given permission to write, it was that everything there was set up to benefit and support my writing.
Was I the “test subject” at Highlights, eating meals with “real” writers who had agents, book-deals and best-sellers? Yea! But they were so welcoming and eager to heap advice on me that I was happy and honored to be carried forward by their talent, experience and generosity.
Unworkshopping is relatively inexpensive at $129/night. That’s a new price as of June 1, but it is inclusive of meals, snacks, local transportation and wifi. If you have the means, make this happen for yourself. You will not be sorry. But, even if you aren’t able to make it to Highlights, consider finding another way to give yourself permission to prioritize your writing. While it was terrifying as a 16-year-old and actually froze a few of us up, as an adult, it opened a floodgate of creativity right when I desperately needed it.
I’m a traditionally published children’s author and I’ve just landed my first adult book deal with a small publisher. I use my real name for my children’s books. Should I take on a pseudonym to distinguish my adult fiction from what I’ve previously published?
Pubbed in Poughkeepsie
Congratulations on your book deal!
There are several reasons why writers and other artists take on a pseudonym. Some like the anonymity they offer, others like the idea of taking on a new persona, and some people want to simplify or jazz up their names. In your case, I would treat this as a branding question and to answer, I would look at the target audience for both of your genres. If there is significant overlap—for instance, if you’re a young adult author who is now publishing a new adult fiction—then I would limit yourself to one name in order to maximize cross-pollination. If the genres are very distant from each other across the spectrum—for instance, children’s picture books and BDSM erotica, then you may have more of a reason to distinguish your bodies of work.
Now, in ye olden days, an author was known simply by their name, which appeared on the cover of their book and not much elsewhere. But nowadays, there is the expectation that an author engages their readers and contemporaries on social media—Facebook, Twitter and the like. For that reason, multiple pseudonyms can get tricky. Therefore, you may want to consider having one umbrella name who writes as others. That way, you won’t have to keep up multiple accounts and personas.
Now, if your fiction is far apart on the spectrum and you’re trying to get school visits while also appealing to the erotica crowd, it may be advantageous to differentiate your online personas. In an ideal world this would be unnecessary because people would understand we are artists and also people with a wide range of taste and artistic pursuits, but we live in a society which likes to put people into tidy boxes. Therefore, for the practical reasons of bringing in enough income to support your art, you may want to keep your brands separated.
These are all things to think about when entering into a contract with a publisher. It might also be wise to talk to your editor or agent and see what they think. They may have some branding ideas for you already.
I’m a graphic designer in addition to being a novelist. I’ve just sold my first book and I’d like to have input on what the cover looks like. How receptive are publishers to the author’s ideas on cover art?
xxoo, Artistically inclined
Dear Artistically inclined,
This question varies widely depending on the publisher. Larger, more traditional publishers tend to have a concrete idea of what they want your title, cover, jacket copy and overall branding to look like. Smaller, independent publishers tend to be more open to the authors’ input. Either way, I would suggest you make a Pinterest board that has pictures of what you think your characters look like, settings from your book, other covers you’d like for yours to emulate, and artistic pieces that you think represent your book’s mood and tenor. For examples, you can check out my Pinterest boards.
Most publishers do take author’s input into account and it always helps the designer if you have a vision for what your characters look like. One thing to be aware of, in particular when it comes to character depiction, is whitewashing, where a publisher lightens the skin tone of your character or diminishes their ethnicity on the cover. I’ve included an example below of this type of activity, LIAR by Justine Larbalestier, where the main character is African American and the cover didn’t reflect that. This cover was corrected by the publisher, but only after a very public outcry. Remember, you are your book’s best advocate and it’s better to push back early on than to let this kind of behavior play out.
Laura Lascarso is the author of two YA novels, COUNTING BACKWARDS (2012) and RACING HEARTS (2015). If you have a burning YA question you’d like answered, tweet it to @lauralascarso with #DearLaura or include it in the comments below.
Earlier this week, I had the privilege of co-teaching at a local high school with Dave Amaditz, another All The Way YA contributor. At the end of the session we’d left time for Q&A and the questions rolled in…
They weren’t new. As an author, I hear versions of the same ones all the time. What inspires you? Where do you get your ideas? What’s the best piece of advice you have for a new author?
When we reached that last question, I prepared to give my standard answer. Join a writer’s group so you can get feedback on your work. Something I whole-heartedly believe in, by the way.
But then something happened. For the first time in a long time, I considered the question. What advice did I really want to give? Sure, writer’s groups are invaluable, and I’d consider myself lost with out the two I’m involved in now. But on that particular morning, I allowed myself to delve deeper. To consider my answer as a small sea of hopeful faces stared up at me.
Here’s what I told them.
“When it comes to feedback, leave your expectations at the door.” Now, I’m paraphrasing a little. Anyone who’s ever seen me speak knows that I get carried away in the moment. But that’s…the gist.
The hopeful faces crinkled, their evident confusion dimming their enthusiasm for a moment. So I explained further.
Whenever we offer up our work for critique, there is some part of us (even if it’s a minuscule part) that’s hoping our work will be deemed “perfect.” That the file we sent out, will return unmarked, with no follow up actions required on our part.
“Give up on that right now, because it’s never going to happen,” I said. Before you rush to comment on what a cruel author I am, give me a little more space to elaborate.
We talk about feedback being subjective on this blog all the time. Or at least I do. We all like what we like. Whether it’s music, books, food… Yet, once that marked-up file returns we cringe, we mope, and we either begin editing like a fiend or reach for the chocolate. And we forget that everyone has certain likes or dislikes. That not everyone is going to dig our particular story or style.
The problem for us writers is, that no matter how much we want that feedback, regardless of how much we ourselves seek it, there’s always that one, small part that’s hoping for crisp sheets of white, filled with compliments. As I said to those kids…
Give up on that right now, because it’s never going to happen.
If you’ve given your manuscript to someone who knows their stuff.
If you’ve given your manuscript to someone whose goal isn’t to placate you, but to help you develop as a writer.
If you’re critique buddy meets those criterion, you’re going to get feedback. Every time. And in almost every case, the more feedback you get, the better the writer you are.
Even if you have a polished manuscript that you’ve rewritten two hundred times and edited just as much, you’re going to get feedback.
Think about how much time we waste figuring that all out for ourselves. Imagine if we reset our expectations and welcome that feedback with open arms.
That’s why I told these kids to leave their expectations at the door. When you know that feedback is coming and you’re waiting for it, expecting it, and you own it when it does show, that you’ll continue to take steps along your continuing journey as a writer.
Let me boil this all down for you. The next time you send your writing out to a critique group or partner, or beta readers, or the kid down the street, reboot your expectations. They are going to have feedback for you.
So take a deep breath, press Send, and wait for the track changes to come. And leave your expectations (and your muddy boots) at the door.
This week I am filling in an outline chart for a retreat with a group of agents and editors. And I am hating every single moment of it. I hate boxing things up. I hate having to answer each question for each scene/chapter. I hate that it feels like killing the flow of creativity.
On the other hand, I actually love plotting. I love building new worlds, digging into characters and their arcs, figuring out what happens when.
But I know quite a few writers who hate plotting. Worse, they feel guilty about hating it.
I know plotters who struggle with making their characters grow or giving their story emotional resonance but know exactly what happens to their characters when. I know pantsers who have a very clear idea of the emotional arc their character(s) go through – but the story itself meanders in places or has too many subplots. We all have our strengths and our weaknesses, no matter what approach we use.
There are tons of fabulous plotting books out there. But they don’t work for everyone because most books on plotting are written for people whose minds work in ways that LIKE plotting.
Plotters are people who use a part of their brain that structures things, analyses them. They get a rush from figuring things out. They like thinking about what their character arcs are, they like knowing where they are going, they like lining things up before they write so the scenes build on each other and come together for the climax.
However, pantsers (writers who don’t plot) see something else entirely when they think about their stories. It could be character emotions, or a holistic overview, or a mass of swirling colors. Whatever they see is what they have to work with. Personally, I have a bit of both going on when I work on stories. But plotting books tend to focus on structuring things, on putting things in boxes, on labeling things, on filling in a chart with things.
But some things just don’t fit in boxes.
So if you start to shake because you’re told to make an outline or fill in a chart, please don’t think there is something wrong with you as a writer. There isn’t.
Instead, it’s time to question the approach most people have when they think of plotting for non-plotters (aka pantsers).
All of the plotting books I’ve read are for people who can plot outside in. They are for people who can do a big-picture overview (three act structure etc.) and then bring it down to the character level after. They can map plot points, fill in character questionnaires, use spread sheets and timeline software. But none of those tools will help writers who discover story the other way around (from the inside out) and prefer to start with a character at a certain point and watch where they go.
Which brings me to the heart of this post. Instead of trying to plot a story when their mind doesn’t approach it that way, pantsers should focus on discovering their story.
When you discover a story, you have an idea, a vision of a character’s emotions, or a feeling you’d like to explore. Instead of thinking about the three act structure and what happens when, pantsers follow a character’s emotional development as he or she moves through events. Pantsers discover their characters, their world, and by the end of the first draft, their plot.
There are many ways of being a pantser. Some pantsers focus on discovering the emotional inner journey of a character, some prefer to discover how events will unfold as they get there, but the common thread is a desire to allow themselves the creative freedom to discover the story as it unfolds.
So how can you help yourself discover your story as you write?
One of the things that helps me is to try to feel the character’s inner journey. To see where they end up emotionally. I find if I know where characters are headed, emotionally, I know what kind of situations will push them to face (or let go of) the problem/issue/emotion they are dealing with. I often let the external situation either echo (to reinforce) or challenge (to create an obstacle) their inner situation. In other words, I guide my characters toward situations that will keep the story moving forward by developing their inner journey.
For example, if I know a character goes from being unsure to sure, I think about what might encourage them to make that transition. Once I know that, I can figure out the situation(s) that would give an emotional payback, and build from there.
Or, if you don’t know where the emotional arc is headed, you can see how the character reacts to different situations and play with those situations until you feel an emotional arc that works for that character.
Either way, thinking about the emotional development of the character as you go can help keep the story moving forward and bring it to a satisfying resolution.
And what about after the story is written? How can a pantser revise then?
When I pantsed my first story, I re-read it and cut everything that didn’t fit (or just didn’t move forward) the emotional development of the character. Although making a chart can help point out areas that lack tension or are superfluous in a manuscript, I hate doing them. Instead, I’ll read the manuscript as a PDF doc on my kindle. The parts that lag or are confusing jump right out. After, I go back to my computer and revise/cut/write a new scene. And build back up from there.
I know many writers who love the rush of the first draft. It’s exciting, it’s new, you’re discovering your story, your characters, your world. And it’s true. It is exciting. But I have come to feel that revising is where you stroke your story into being alive. Revising is where you can take the time to deepen your characters, their reactions, their emotions. You tweak an emotion in one scene, and it impacts how the character enters the next scene – potentially changing how that scene goes. Since you now know how the main character feels, you also know how they can or can’t react. It’s all one big, amazing, 4D puzzle.
It’s a story. And it’s yours, no matter how you got there. So trust yourself and how your mind works. If you like plotting, by all means plot. If you need to have complete freedom to explore a character, go explore.
Or maybe, like me, you’ll find a balance between the two that works for you.
Either way, happy writing and happy revising!